Is this a well-written review?

You say that the book "is narrated by Elizabeth." That's not true. Elizabeth is the main character, but the story is told by an omniscient third-person narrator. (Oddly, you seem to know that the novel is not narrated in the first person, yet you say that Elizabeth is the narrator. There seems to be some confusion there.) You also say that "the novel lacks dramatic emotions." Many readers would dispute that. Characters in the book display a great deal of dramatic emotion.